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My OC by awesome992 My OC by awesome992
His name is AWESTRUCK GREEN

credit me and selenaede
Bases to make are from Selenaede
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EightballPixels Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014
I would say "good basedolling", but there are a lot of things that need to be fixed here...

:bulletred: Practice drawing manes yourself; the premade manes give no practice and really just make you look lazy.
:bulletred: Please stay away from the MS Paint default colors. They are easy to recognize to the trained eye, and look very ugly. Try using the Custom Colors feature a lot more.
:bulletred: I also recommend changing his name; Awesomely Green isn't a good name for a character. How about Awestruck Green? It rolls off the tongue better and generally sounds better as a name, while still being essentially the same name.

So overall, needs some work. The character has a lot of potential, but the mistakes you made really do not help. If you'd like, I can try making a design for him myself.

Takane Enomoto (No love interest) [V7] 
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awesome992 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thanks ill work on re drawing it
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Mysterium-Xarxes Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is really cute X3
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awesome992 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thanks
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